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PostSubject: [RPG] Posts   Thu Jun 30, 2011 4:26 am

When you're RPing, try to make posts as detailing as possible. Don't make short, misspelled, failing posts.
Example:

Big no:
He walks to the shop and says hello and buys some noodles eats it then leaves!!

Big yes:
Name takes a quick look at the sun, it's starting to set, but it's still blistering hot. He can hear his stomach rumble of hunger. He looks to his left and sees a big, two-layered, somewhat 'ancient' looking restaurant. He walked towards it. The door seemed to be missing, so he walked right in. He gets greeted by the elderly man standing behind the counter, and quickly greets back by nodding with a friendly face. Sitting down at the table nearest to the counter, he takes orders some Noodles.

Some minutes pass, and another person, a female in her 30's or so, brings Name the hot noodles. In a small cup on the table there are various types of kuaizi (筷子), but Name prefers his one, which he has with him in his pocket. He takes them out and takes his first taste. Amazing. He has no clue what he's tasting, but it tastes astounding.

After finishing his dish, he reaches for his pocket and takes out some coins, more than the woman had asked for, a little tip. He stands up, greets, and leaves the building. The sun has not yet set, and Name heads for his house.




Each post MUST BE longer than 3 full lines. Shorter than this will result in the post being removed.

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