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PostSubject: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Thu Jun 30, 2011 6:05 pm

Today was not a good day for General yu, last night he had been training Inside the large dome Inside the training camp almost all day and night. He paced back and forth stopping with each step,as he stared at about 20 recruits that stood feet away from him, Today he had to put the new recruits through a test, a very hard test the training field was perfect rocks and dirt all around good for Earth bending.

''So we got fresh meet aye!?''He yelled out to the newbies who all gave a little shake at the word meat.'Well, before anyone makes it, you all will be put through a test''He walked quickly to come face to face with a short fat recruit, who's helmet was a little to small for his head''Ah, You might not even be able to stand after im done with you''The general let a a large laugh turning his head to face the elite's who stood behind him standing still,as each of them gave a little laugh.

The general cleared his throat,looking back and forth to the recruits as he began to speak''The first test is survival, If you can survive my elite's you are one step closer to glory'' The general stepped backwards folding his hands behind his back he turned away from the recruits facing the elite's''There all your's'The elite's smiled as the general disappeared into his camp tent.

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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Fri Jul 01, 2011 4:12 am

Omashu - Finally, Jang Mi was on her way back home. And what a lovely announcemt that awaited her arrival.

She heard General Yu giving a speech out to his new recruits. Raising an army now was it? Though not an excellent bender, Jang Mi figured this would be the place to go to if she wanted to finally home in on her sparring perfection.
Even so, at her level, it was almost certain she would be defeated by someone with more experiece. But hey, what did she have to lose?

She arrived in the clearing on horseback, keeping an unchanging expression, quitely analysing all those who stood before her. Who was this General Yu they spoke of...

She then made her way to the Fire Lord's Tent, despite not knowing who on Earth he was, drawing her rapier from it's sheath

A guard attacked her at random, sending multiple earth spikes flying at her at once. Jang Mi kicked her horse forwards, and it easily outmanoevured the man's bending. Her blade gleamed in her grasp, before she brought it down on the guard in one clean sweep.

Well, that was easy... maybe this mount is an unfair advantage...

By now, Jang Mi was surrounded. being on somewhat higher ground would be a disadvantage on her part, making her an easier target. She dismounted, and the horse happily trotted away out of sight. Her opponents were all kind enough to wait for her, and Jang Mi was glad that standard etiquette was still in play.

Silver Lantern glowed slightly. Raising the earth beneath her feet, she dashed towards a guard at random with extra speed. He brought his blade down, and Jang Mi expertly twisted to the side of him and knocked him on the back with the hilt of her rapier.
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Fri Jul 01, 2011 4:04 pm

The general was sitting lovely inside his warm tent away from all the ruckus that took place outside.He heard a few yells and ahhh's. He sat folding his legs onto his small bamboo mat, He took a small sip from Warms sake, that rested inside a small cup that almost was kncoked over by a hard vibration. He sat it back onto the table next to him, stretching out his arms then giving a loud yawn.

He did want to get out on the action but it would not be fair, He would just sit and wait and see who made it back to his tent.Usaully it was only his elite's and like one soilder, hopefully it would more than just one.
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Fri Jul 01, 2011 8:20 pm

Jang Mi's sword hand finally fell still, as she finally knocked her last opponent into submission. The rapier in her hand stopped glowing, and it was then Jang Mi noticed she had a massive hand-cramp.

It was also then that she noticed the mess of the "battlefield" behind her. The land was scarred from all sorts of bending techniques, and lines of her own silver zig-zagged across the entire area. Well, the entire thing wasn't her alone... but being the last one left standing seemed impressiver enough.

Okay. Not the last one. But pretty darn near it. And what was her prize again, after going through all that trouble? Oh yea. The final battle at the General's tent. And then some ranking in te army or something...

She sighed, still majorly worn out, and made her way to the tent. "Challenge, Accepted..." Jang Mi said, once she made her way to the opening of the temporary residence.
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Fri Jul 01, 2011 8:27 pm

He noticed a young girl come into his tent the first words he heard were challenged accepted''.turning his gaze away form her he said''Sure,right now''The general stood up from the ground.He raised his hands towards the top of the tent,As the ground began to shake below him,Dirt began to suck up almost everything around.

The tent around him disappeared beneath the earth the men outside disappeared beneath the ground leaving them just as it looked like in the middle of no where.''Okay when ever your ready. you challenged so you get the honors of attacking me first.''

He moved backwards taking his hung gar stance awaiting her attack.
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Fri Jul 01, 2011 8:35 pm

Ah... allowing a first strike after that... is this because I'm a girl?

After that performance, Jang Mi had wondered just what on Earth she got herself into. But no matter, as long as she lived, she had nothing to lose; at least that's what she thought, as her grip tightened around her right hand

She dug her sword into the ground, etching a fine line into the surface. Then, sweeping the sword upwards and pointing at the General, the line grew and protruded upwards, until it became an earthen wall of spikes. That wall quickly gained it's speed, as it followed the direction of where the blade was pointing. Then, using the spikes as cover, Jang Mi zig zagged in between the gaps in the wall, dashing towards her opponent.
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Fri Jul 01, 2011 8:42 pm

He laughed watching his opponents attacks those wear very basic attacks and they would be easily countered. The spikes came up from the ground shooting there way through the ground towards him after she slid her sword across the ground.

Using a technique he moved his hands towards his waist then directed his fist towards the ground by pushing his hands back out from his center, using earth smash He sends it forward smashing most of the spikes out the way.He jumped backwards out of her range as he noticed her dashing forward.

By using earthbending to shake the ground back and forth, He created dust of clouds of various size to provide cover. using this he sidestepped,out of where the dust was to visually see his opponent. Using earth smash he stopped his right foot hard onto the ground A circular boulder shot out of the ground, he swung his right fist at his opponent by punching the boulder sending the Circular Boulder at her back.
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Sat Jul 02, 2011 8:08 pm

Jang Mi shielded her eyes from the field of dust that surrounded her. Surely, he'd still be straight ahead, even if he did have to break all the spikes first...

She charged out of the dust, then realised she had indeed gone in the wrong direction. And then noticed the boulder coming up behind her. She charged her rapier with energy, making the metal multiple times denser, then blocked the oncoming boulder with the point. She skidded backwards a few paces, until it finally came to a halt.

Found him... Distance user, huh? Jang Mi split the boulder twice, so there were about three equal sizes, although with one or two flat surfaces. Then, slightly raising the earth underneath, she returned the boulders back towards the general from three different directions - one from the left, one right, and one head on. Jang Mi followed closely behind one of them, aiming to close the distance.
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Sat Jul 02, 2011 8:21 pm

The general had now seen the girl stop his boulder and split it three two equal parts. He smiled she sent three parts of the boulder towards him from three different direction's. He raised his fist forwards to the one on the left using earth smash to cancel the boulder sending it back into the ground. The one came from midd;e and the other from the right.

He knew in his mind she was using one for cover so he just did what he had to do. Both of them coming towards him, He stomped both his feet into the ground spreading out his horse stance even further, He raised his right elbow as an Earth wall came up from in front of him, swinging his hips to the left with his palm also, he sent the wall racing towards the one on his right as they smashed into each other creating Shards of rock and hints of dust. ''One more''

The last was was coming near it was close but it would be very easy to counter. He Smashed his right fist into the ground bending his right knee and his back, creating a large earthquake racing towards her, As he sent it He jumped backwards while swinging his arms and hands several times creating about eight boulder's jumping out the ground as he kicks them all with one roundhose kick into a straight line towards where she would be, if she blocked the attack.
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Sat Jul 02, 2011 9:07 pm

Jang Mi jumped when she felt the tremors underneath her feet, expecting an Earth Spike attack. She aimed to land on the rolling rock in front of her, except that it smashed under the weight of another oncoming boulder. Clumsily skipping over the larger boulder, she leapt into the air in time to see 7 more boulders rolling to her previous direction. Well, that was a lucky dodge. Maybe choosing the middle one wasn't such a great idea...

She skipped across the tops of the last few, then leapt high into the air once again. Blade first, Jang Mi dived towards the general, holding her right arm straight in front of her, aiming for his right shoulder.
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Sat Jul 02, 2011 9:17 pm

His opponent was quick nothing he couldn't handle though, He seen the change in the air and in the earth when she jumped high up into the air, He thought in his mind this girl needed training. He looked up staring at her for a second as she came down with her blade aimed right at him.

He stretched out his index finger then plucking his index finger at the air, using Earth line As an offensive attack, He created a line of twisted columns from the ground and propeled it forward towards his opponent, with the speed she was going she would have to be lucky to miss this.

As he sent it forward He forced his hands down towards his side using Earth column to send a stream of a protrusion from underground his feet to send him into the air, watching the twisted column prepel forward towards her he was now standing on the column looking down at her, He stretched out his palm while swinging his hips sending another earth line from the column he stood up on now jumping off landing back to the ground towards to her back.If they both connected they would crush her in a sandwhich like form only injuring her.
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Sat Jul 02, 2011 9:31 pm

Ah. Massive Earth column. How did Jang Mi not see that one coming.

Her hardened rapier managed to pierce through it, but not much else. The column kept moving, and the blade wouldn't budge. All that remained visible of it was the hilt. Jang Mi cursed, then flipped under the column, falling with her back to the ground, before the other one caught up behind her. It seemed as though the rest of this battle would be without a weapon.

The general was already positioned where she would touch the ground; - well, he was obviously prepared. Jang Mi did a 180 body twist, and made a sweeping downwards kick so that her left leg would connect with the top of his head or shoulders if he didn't move out of the way.
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Sat Jul 02, 2011 9:38 pm

He knew his opponent was getting a little frustrated, she got her sword stuck inside the earth column, if she knew a certain technique she would simply take it out. but instead she tried to attack him.

Her leg came fast as all the others but just not fast enough, He lifted his arms Creating a Earth Guantlet on arm as bits of the ground flew up and covered his right arms. Her kick bounced off the guantlet.as he twsited his body around Face to face with her he rose his hands towards her face''Move and your gone''He spoke out,to her if she attempted to move the earth beneath would suck her below suffocating her, or he could just blow a boulder into her face''Bow down and call me your Master,Because im taking you as my apprentice''.
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Sat Jul 02, 2011 10:02 pm

Jang Mi had seen that stance somewhere in the past, back when she was young. She saw a circus performer do it a couple of times, although she wasn't quite sure of it's effects. However, she did remember that it was dubbed the "Doomsday Hold". Now probably wasn't the best time to re live that.

After listening to him, she said "Oh, really?" Twice. The first time was with an "As if" tone. Then when she suddenly understood the offer, it was more like a "Wait, really? Seriously? You'll do it?" Jang Mi did a 90 degree bow, and said; "Yes... Master," still rather stunned. Master. How long was it, before she had to address someone like that? "Fighting you has been an eye opener. I hope to learn more under your apprenticeship..."
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Sat Jul 02, 2011 10:12 pm

He smiled her expression at first was like as if,then she seemed to calm down bowing hard to him, He raised his hand to simply tell her to raise, he turned his back to her and spoke''You will be under my tutelage, I will teach you all skill of the earth nation, basic and advanced to were one day you will take my spot as general''.

'We are done here, when I say jump you jump,when I say kick you kick.Are training will begin soon down in the gaouling area.''I want you prepared for what's to come.
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Wed Jul 06, 2011 10:49 am

Satiro peeked around the corner at the marvelous girl. She was fighting the general and not doing half bad. She was... magnificent. He heard the general say that someday she would become the general. His jaw dropped. He ran out from behind the corner and right up to the general. He yelled, "I wanna fight you too, I could do good!" He pulled a peice of apple out of his pack and squeezed the juice right into his mouth and became extremely hyper as he awaited the generals answer.
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Wed Jul 06, 2011 1:51 pm

His eyes darted to the boy whom ran out of nowhere towards him with a anxious look to his face the general gave a shocked look as the boy began to talk inquiring he wanted to fight me.

''Oh you do?''The general looks at Jang, then back to the boy then at jang''ok, Fight Jang and ill see if your worthy enough'' He stepped backwards creating a dome around himself pounding his fist towards the ground, He only seen out the little hole of the dome as he yelled fight.
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Wed Jul 06, 2011 4:00 pm

OOC:sorry meant to post this with Satiro Sad


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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Wed Jul 06, 2011 4:02 pm

Satiro smiled. He put his palms together and pointed his fingers in front of him. He slid his right hand up so that his fingers pointed up at the sky. A jagged almost squareshaped disk rose from the ground. He stomped, pulling energy from the earth up his leg and into his arm. He punched the disk and sent it flying towards Jang.
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Thu Jul 07, 2011 7:19 am

Jang Mi looked back at the boy who spoke. He had short hair, he was pretty short himself, and pretty...young. In fact, why was a child like this trying to join the army? Maybe he had come here out of sheer boredom, or just to test his abilities. In any case, he didn't look like a complete newbie at bending.

"Ah... You meant to start now?" And how come I've never seen that technique before?

Jang Mi started backwards, then ran behind the earth coloumns that were made by the General from the previous fight. Screw flaws and all that, she'd be wanting her sword back for this, it was best not to underestimate your opponent.

The disc crashed into the column. It cracked and crumbled at the base, then started to come crashing to the ground. Jang Mi ran parrallel to it, then dragged her rapier out from it's weakened structure at the last moment.

"Please don't tell me you're a distance fighter... Those are the most annoying types to deal with." She said, making her way in front of the rubble. At this distance... no, it certainly won't do. Nothing too fancy yet, just until I regain my strength.

Leaving herself open to another attack and the chance to counter, Jang Mi ran at the kid, all the while drawing a sliver line along the ground by dragging the point of her blade behind her.
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Thu Jul 07, 2011 6:02 pm

The bladenipped him on his elbow and he snorted. She wanted this to be easy for her. He pulled up a cliff and rode it away from Jang. He pulled up 2 rocks and punhed them both at Jang. He was going to give here exactly what she didn't want.
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Fri Jul 08, 2011 3:02 pm

Jang Mi looked at the boy, as if to say "Wait... he's allowed to do that?"

But he just did. Talk about an unfair advantage. But hey, time to get some excersice in swordplay, while she still had direct contact with the ground. She checked the length of the silver line along the ground. Long enough. When the rapier left the ground, the silver line had materialised into a thin line of metal. It snaked along in a curve in front of her, splitting the two boulders in half, before dissolving into dust. One down...

Then, starting from the base of the cliff, started a wall of spikes, rapidly climbing it, towards the kid.
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:18 pm

The spikes came at him and when they were about an inch away he pulled up three boulders and hit the spikes into the air. The spikes had ascended about ten feet in the air when he reached behind him and pulled hiss arms down sending the spikes spiraling down at the girl.
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Fri Jul 08, 2011 7:20 pm

What? You too? I have to learn levitation soon, otherwise I'll constantly be at a serious disadvantage...

Although reluctant to move back, Jang Mi was forced to in order to evade the falling spikes of death. Her stamina was already drained by now, so no more bursts of speed or gigantic accurate spikes. That left suprisingly little options left.

I wonder why I've gotten a sudden dent in my imagination, now of all times.
Becoming charged with chi energy, the silver rapier in her hand gleamed brilliant silver, as if to reflect her concentration. Jang Mi spread her arms, and flexed her wrists. Starting in front of her, a small tremor could be felt within the earth. Then, sweeping and clapping her hands together in front of her, the earth moved, like a wave at first, until an entire wall was on the move to attack Satiro's cliff from the base.
The sword dimmed and flickered, and suddenly became almost dull; as if it were dying from the inside out.

"He's good..." She mused. "He's not nearly so much as a beginner as I am. Master, is this enough?"
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PostSubject: Re: ''General Yu and his recruits''   Fri Jul 08, 2011 8:59 pm

Satiro saw the oncoming wall and opened up a door that barely fit him. He felt his head to make sure it was still there and it was, of course. He smiled and looked up at the girl. He had recently been to the southern water tribe and had seen them use a certain teqnique he thought might be able to be used by an earthbender in a more hardened fashion. He was about to use it when the girl asked the general if we had faought enough. He understood and was fine with it. She was probably tired from all the fighting she had been doing. "It is fine with me. Is that enough general?"
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